Memories to me means something that I remember from the past,
I remember when my mom passed away.
The feeling I was fearful,
I didn't know what was going to happen later on.
My mom was diagnosed with a Brain Tumor
and that what memory means to me.
She was a very kind person with a open heart.
Because of all the support I got from family and friends,
I am now a better person because of it.
Having this memory made me stronger and I'm for
who I am today because of this.
I think this poem is so important because you are showing how remembrance will forever effect you. Beautifully done, especially how your memory of your mom links to the support you received that pulled you through it. To add more to the poem, use a simile or metaphor to describe how the memory made you stronger. I think that will solidify your writing. Very well done Annie:)
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