Remember that you are awesome,
No matter what others say.
Walk around with confidence,
Don't let worldly things get in your way.
Remember to be you,
Don't change for anyone else,
Be positive and happy,
And always be true to yourself.
I loved your poem! I liked how you told others to love themselves. This is a very empowering poem! I really loved this poem!!! I wouldn't change a thing! Keep up the good work!!!
ReplyDeleteGreat post! everything is so true! every word! I love it!
ReplyDeleteThat really was a great poem! The way your rhymes fit into your poem so well was just awesome. So keep it up, because that is really what makes good poems.
ReplyDeleteI really like this--it's short but upbeat and positive with a solid message. I like the rhyming too--it works nice and you don't lose the "meat" of the poem in the rhymes. I would suggest adding a simile or metaphor to the poem to give it more depth through description. Well done!
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