Monday, February 2, 2015

Seth M. January post -Thoughts-

                                                                 Thoughts

Your thoughts are what you think
But what you think is what you thought
You can think of things right now
Right here on the spot

Because if you are thinking
Or you think what you once thought
Then you might not be seeing
All the things you've got

For in your mind you do not see
But you do, do you not
Because your mind is a mystery
As you think, the things you've  thought

But in your mind lies creativity
It lies in every thought
And while you think of things once thought
Why don't you think, of all you've got

4 comments:

  1. 50% inspired by the video "don't hug me i'm scared"... don't judge me. :)

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  2. Awesome. This is really good, I like how it rhymes and sounds cool. Great job, keep up the great work!

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  3. It was a really cool poem and it was very deep. The only thing I would add that there was some comma displacement, but it was nice-flowing.

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  4. This was great! I loved the way it sounded when I read it out loud. I didn't really see any errors, but Lainie might be right. Keep up the AMAZING work!

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