Thursday, February 5, 2015

Saving Mr. Penguin

Imagine you're a penguin and you are coming out of the water full of good fish then everything around you is black. It is an oil spill that killed many ecosystems. Some humans took it into their hands to save the penguins and they did. The humans saved the penguins just by trying to be nice, they had to endure many cuts from beaks and also talons. The humans saved many hundreds of penguins.

Many volunteers helped to clean and to get the penguins back to what they had before the oil spill. According to the Amazing Penguin Rescue article “over 40,000 penguins were saved.” 40,000 penguins were saved just because people could not just sit there and watch the penguins die. The Penguins inside of the article were saved by the people that wanted to save them.

Oil spills can kill so many things they are very deadly. Humans saved the penguins just because they were good people. I conclude that the people did a very good thing by saving the penguins from that nasty oil spill. If they did not help the penguins then the penguins would probably die if they did not help.

2 comments:

  1. This is a very convincing essay. There was a period missing in the last paragraph. Good job.

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  2. This is really good! I thought there was a few run on sentences, but what I did like, was that you painted a picture in my head.

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