Thursday, February 26, 2015

Robin Hood: February post

Robin Hood: Hero or Criminal?
Robin Hood is a legendary story that most people have heard, but the question is, is he a hero or villain? Robin Hood, along with his merry men, live as outlaws in Sherwood Forest. They fight the rich to protect the poor. So is he a thief or hero? Because of his actions, he is both.
Hood and his men steal from the rich, keeping some of it for themselves, and giving some to the poor who are in great need. Because he keeps some of it for himself, he is a thief. Because he gives to the poor, he is also a great help. This is why he is both hero and villain.
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11 comments:

  1. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2015 at 8:06 AM

    GREAT!!! One thing I would recommend is adding a little more detail into your paragraphs and sentences other than that it was great.

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  2. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2015 at 8:07 AM

    I agree with Kyler, you should add a little more detail to the paragraphs, but other than that it was amazing

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  4. UnknownFebruary 26, 2015 at 8:08 AM

    Ya, I agree with kyler it could use a little more detail, but other than that it looks great.

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2015 at 8:08 AM

    That was really good. I do think that you could have added more to make it a little longer, but overall, it was really good.

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  6. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2015 at 8:10 AM

    I think that she is right and that he was both i think that you should make it longer and add some more details.

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  7. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2015 at 8:11 AM

    Good job! I like how you said that he is a hero and a villain. I would just add what Robin Hood stole. What did he keep for himself? Also, in the second paragraph it should be stole from the rich. Keep up the good work!

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  8. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2015 at 8:12 AM

    It is good but I agree with Skyklar you could have made it just a little bit longer but other than that it was good.

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  9. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2015 at 8:17 AM

    Good job stir!! One thing is just adding more detail and using the article more like in-text citations. I really liked how you explained he was both. You could add more evidence to say he was one or another. Keep up the writing! (and ya it should of been stole because it was in the past:)

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  10. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2015 at 9:34 AM

    I agree with everyone else... more detail. But good work besides that.

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  11. AnonymousFebruary 26, 2015 at 9:35 AM

    I agree with everyone else... more detail. But good work besides that.

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