Bullying
Bullying is a terrible thing, to begin with. It doesn’t help or enlighten others. It doesn’t show a good example. It’s doesn’t even have a good purpose! Bullying, more or less, is a soul wrecker, a happiness destroyer, an ultimate weapon to make people look down on themselves. When people bully, they are slashing other’s self-esteem with a knife, over and over again until the bully finally gains control. To the victim, after a while, life doesn't even matter. What did matter was taken away.
Bullying is a big problem. I mean BIG. But people treat it like an everyday thing. That’s the problem. It is an everyday thing. And it’s ruining kids’ lives. But adults don’t see far enough into the subject to see that they can do something. They can help their kids! But how is always unanswered. Here is the solution: Make their parents pay the consequences.
When you look down into the root of bullying, it always comes down to the parents. They are either the cause of the bullying or they aren’t preventing it. I mean, parents are the sheep herders of the children. They make the decisions of what is right or wrong. But sometimes they don’t pay enough attention to the child and let them do whatever they will without punishment. Maybe fining them will help them see the truth a little better than they had before.
Sometimes the parents cause the bullying. Not all parents are caring. Some physically or mentally abuse their kids. This can lead to the act of bullying at school or in the neighborhood. Bullying doesn’t stop with one person. It keeps going and going and going and going and going, like a chain reaction. So instead of destroying one kid’s potential, parents are destroying hundreds, thousands, of good futures. That’s how serious bullying is. It’s not one person. It’s the world.
I have listed an entire three paragraphs to explain my opinion. But it won’t do anything. It’s only ink. But I know that others can. If they try. But that’s the thing. They don’t. Maybe this new law will help them understand the truth.
ummmmm... there aren't words that can describe this, and I don't mean it in the jaw-dropping essays that have been written before. It did make me laugh though, but I guess all of shade's essays are supposed to do that. All I could say is that you kept the "and going" thing going and going for a little too long.
ReplyDeleteP.S. this is written in pixels, not ink :)
This is a good essay. I am convinced. You shouldn't have used "I" that much. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ethan because you shouldn't use "I" in an argumentative essay. Other than that, I was very convinced!!!
ReplyDeleteThis is a very good essay. I was so convinced right when you brought the fining subject up. You have really good voice in your writing, too. Keep writing and keep doing a great job!
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