Thursday, February 26, 2015
Robin Hood - Hero or Villan?
Is Robin Hood a hero or a villan? He is a hero. He took stuff from the selfish, rich people, and gave it to the poor people who didn't have any money. The rich people didn't care about the poor people. They wouldn't help them out. This is where Robin Hood comes in.Robin Hood stole from the wealthy. He could of done something else that could have solved more problems but what he did was still good. The wealthy people were the bad guys and the poor people were the good guys. This is why Robin Hood is a hero.
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Nice job Annie you are a good writer. I agree that Robin Hood is a hero. I really liked your reasons why Robin Hood is a hero. For instance you said that "he took stuff from the selfish, rich people, and gave it to the poor people who didn't have any money". The only thing that I think that you should change is make it longer.
ReplyDeleteI liked it, it was very short but came to the point. The only change I think should be made is sometimes the spaces weren't spaced right and "He could of" should be changed to "He could have".
ReplyDeleteGreat job! It was really convincing and good, but it need to be a little longer so you can explain more about why he is good and not bad.
ReplyDeleteGood job! It made lots of sense. Though I agree it should be longer.
ReplyDeleteGood job Annie B! A few grammar fixes, and also try to combine two sentences to make a compound sentence. Other than that great job!
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