Your Rainy Day
It's that type of day you get to sleep in. You are unable to open your eyes all the way because of how bright the sunlight is that is shining straight through your window. You can smell the sweet rain slowly as it drifts up your nose. The rain is softly tapping the roof, as it slowly slides down the window with a little sparkle in the sunlight. Looking down at your frozen feet and their under but the blanket is to short to cover your toes. The room is kinda muggy as if you were stranded onto a wetland but your still enjoying the sound of the wind and the rain slowly tapping the roof.. Finally you start to drag yourself out of bed and suddenly look outside of the window to see the birds chirping in the wet and soggy trees.
Really good writing! It totally explains the feeling of rain. There are a few sentences that probably should have a comma, but other than that it was awesome!
ReplyDeleteI love rain! So this was amazing, A few grammar fixes, and I want to know what happens next so keep going with the writing! But I really liked it, good job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job shayli! That was amazing! I also agree with Baylee and Hallie. There were a few grammer mistakes but besides that is was wonderful!
ReplyDeleteGreat job shayli! That was amazing! I also agree with Baylee and Hallie. There were a few grammer mistakes but besides that is was wonderful!
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