February Writing Post
Immigrants Kyler Gibb P.2
Immigrants have changed America because throughout the past couple of decades, Mexican immigrants have moved into southern California and bringing with them some of their favorite recipes and treats. The most popular food brought with them was tacos. Tacos have been an all time American favorite and it all started with Immigrants.
Most American food that we eat comes from a native or foreign country. Pizza comes from Italy, the hamburger was born in Germany and brought over here, and of course the taco which was brought from Mexico. Immigrants now are starting to eat foods that they wouldn't eat in their home country and are bringing more and more foods to the United States. Immigrants have changed our country and we have changed them because of these reasons.
Good writing! I liked all the examples.
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"Pizza comes from Italy"
you should have made it past tense because that's what you did with all your other examples.
Other than that, this is pretty good!
Good Job! I loved how you put in all the different examples about the different places our food comes from. I agree with David, you just need to make "Pizza comes from Italy" past tense. Other than that, I loved it!
ReplyDeleteGreat job. I enjoyed reading this. I agree with the others about making the sentence into past tense. This was really good! Good job!
ReplyDeleteThat was awesome! I Also agree with the others. If you put that sentence in past tense it would be even better! Keep up the great work!
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