Robin Hood
Robin hood was a very talented man, he had a perfect shot with his bow and arrow. With the help of his Marry men, He could achieve many great things. Such as he would steal from the rich and give to the poor. Many people may think he is just a rotten thief, but I think Robin Hood is good. Because the king would steal from the poor and robin would just get it back.
Many people can argue whether Robin Hood is good or bad, because in some eyes the king is doing no harm and robin is just stealing from them. In Robin Hood, from Scholastic News, It talks about how the king went to get taxes from the poor but one lady couldn’t pay so he took one of her very valuable belongings. But Marian explained that it wasn’t fair, because she was born into a poor family, unlike her and the King who were born into royalty. I agree with Marian, It’s not fair, why is he the king instead of someone else who would be worthy and could be true to his kingdom.
Great job! I liked how you said that it basically just taking back the already stolen. I can't see any problems with it so good work.
ReplyDeleteAwesome job! I liked how you used an in text citation. Everything looks good. I saw a few run on sentences here and there but everything else is great! Good job!
ReplyDeleteGreat job. I enjoyed reading about how you felt about Robin Hood. I saw while I was reading a few errors. If you just fixed those your writing would be even better.
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