Is Robin Hood a hero or a villain? According to Scholastic It states that Robin Hood stole money from the wealthy and gave it to the poor, which the wealthy wouldn't help the poor because they wanted to keep it to them selves. Robin was always trying to help others in need. While the rich would never help the ones that needed the extra boost, on the other hand Robin would always steal/take from the wealthy which wasn't right because they earned the money and he would just take from them. Others stated him as a ruthless man.
IS ROBIN HOOD A HERO OR A VILLAIN?
You're a good writer Shayli. I like your evidence from the text. I really liked when you said that "it states that Robin Hood stole money from the wealthy and gave it to the poor". And I really liked the vocabulary you used. For instance when you said that Robin Hood was a ruthless man, that was good vocabulary. The only thing I would have changed is I would have made it a little longer.
ReplyDeleteYou're a good writer Shayli. I like your evidence from the text. I really liked when you said that "it states that Robin Hood stole money from the wealthy and gave it to the poor". And I really liked the vocabulary you used. For instance when you said that Robin Hood was a ruthless man, that was good vocabulary. The only thing I would have changed is I would have made it a little longer.
ReplyDeleteIt is a really good passage! The way you talked about Robin Hood was really interesting, the only thing that you should do that comes to mind is maybe try to make the passage a little bit longer.
ReplyDeleteI like how much evidence you use but can you make it a little longer? And more detail please.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! It was really good, but I think need to be a little longer with more detail.
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