Ryan Bethers P.1
Journey to the Center of the Earth
Once upon a time there was a Chicken. The Chicken had always wanted to go to the center of the earth because, he was the last chicken on earth, and he had been told that their were more chickens in the center of the earth. So that Chicken was famous so he had been given a giant metal chicken machine, that had a diamond beak. The Chicken had already tried to peck at the ground multiple times, but he wouldn’t get that far. So the Chicken was excited to use the giant chicken machine because he was sure he could get further with him controlling it. One day the chicken jumped in his machine and turned it on and it started to peck at the ground with its diamond beak. After a long time the Chicken was still in his chicken machine and not even close to getting to the end of the crust. Plus it was getting really hot, and the Chickens ears popped. As the Chicken gradually got closer to the end of the crust the heat and the pressure kept getting worse and worse. All the sudden the Chicken made it out of the crust and then his machine melted so fast, and the Chicken instantly turned Kentucky Fried! After that there was no more chickens left on earth people guessed that the last chicken must have made it to the center of the earth, but they will never know that the chicken didn’t make it.
Ok... I like how you used your imagination and did a lot of things with the chicken, but i think it could be a little more descriptive. Other then that it looks great!!!
ReplyDeleteOk... I like how you used your imagination and did a lot of things with the chicken, but i think it could be a little more descriptive. Other then that it looks great!!!
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