Soccer Poem
There are lots of different sports
like basketball or baseball,
but there is one sport
that is better than the rest.
The ball is black and white.
There are two large nets.
The game is played on grass.
Soccer is my favorite sport.
My team scores a goal.
We all cheer with joy!
We all give hugs
and now we are up by two.
But even if we don't win,
we are still number one.
We play hard day and night
so we can beat them next time.
I love this poem. It's great. I loved how you said that soccer was the best sport. I totally agree. I probably wouldn't even change a single thing about it. Wonderful Poem.
ReplyDeleteGreat job Sierra!!! I love sports and I liked how you named a lot of them but only focused on one! It really painted a picture in my mind of what you experience when you play soccer. I would maybe just write a little more on what it feels like to be in the game. Other then that l really enjoyed it!!
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