I listened to How Do I Know When a Poem Is Finished? by Naomi Shihab Nye. I liked how the description she used painted a picture in my mind. I also liked how she personified the room she was describing.
Never was I alone
Not when I was reading
All the characters were there for me
Every page to the next was full of comfort
New adventures with new twists
New characters brought forth new stories
Many endings were tragic
Yet many were happy
I never felt alone
Until I returned to reality
Great job! I like how you said there are new adventures with new twists. I would just add punctuation. It would make your poem easier to read. Also, add a little bit more. Keep up the good writing.
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