BATMAN
Everything I own has a prefix of "Bat".
Batplane.
Batmobile.
Batboat.
Obsessed with bats.
Fighting crime.
Criminals hate me, fear me.
Dressed in black.
Batmobile.
Batboat.
Obsessed with bats.
Fighting crime.
Criminals hate me, fear me.
Dressed in black.
Slowly stalking.
Watching.
Waiting to strike.
Throw a bat shaped knife
At the Joker's face.
Punch him.
Kick him.
Knee him.
Be a Boss.
I'm Batman.
I like how creative you were with your poem! Like who would have thought to do their favorite super hero. It is also good that you aren't rhyming in every sentence. Maybe if you thought of more descriptive things to say. Other than that it was great!
ReplyDeleteYou know, If I were Batman, those would be my thoughts. Awesome Poem. I like how descriptive you made it.
ReplyDeleteGood Job Ethan! I really liked the topic for this poem! Great Creativity! I loved how the schemes rymed great job!
ReplyDeleteNice job Ethan your a good writer! I really liked the way your described exactly what batman did. I really liked the creativity of your poem. The only thing that I would change is I think that you should have a little more rhyming, that's just in my opinion. Otherwise it is perfect.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I thought it was really good! the only thing i would fix is to make it more descriptive.
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