Tuesday, March 31, 2015

This Day

      Waking up in the morning isn't to exciting... Picture yourself waking up to this day. You wake up ten minutes before you have to sprint over to the bus stop!Your scrambling to find your clothes while your brushing your teeth at the same time. Your mouth is full of toothpaste as its slowly running down your chin. Multitasking can be very difficult. The bus has arrived, don't forget your backpack!         School has now begun bright and early and its only first period five more to go! In first period you have a report due and it's not quite finished yet..Second period you don't know what to do your blog post on. Third period is easy you just sit at a computer. Fourth period you have to do flashcards that are due, and now its finally lunch! You have a Enchilada for lunch but then you realize its school lunch so its not your favorite. Two more periods! Then school is over! Family comes into town that lives all the way up North and the party begins! ;)

3 comments:

  1. Great job Bobby!! I really really liked it! I loved all the detail and how you related it to your own life and your feelings about each class! It was fantastic! Maybe one thing that I would fix is maybe explaining a little bit more in every class. Such as who your teacher is, your friends in that class, etc. Other than that it was awesome!

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  2. Great job Bobby!! I really really liked it! I loved all the detail and how you related it to your own life and your feelings about each class! It was fantastic! Maybe one thing that I would fix is maybe explaining a little bit more in every class. Such as who your teacher is, your friends in that class, etc. Other than that it was awesome!

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  3. Good start Shayli! I loved the description in the first few lines, but then you sped up the writing and it was finished. As you revise, go back and add more details and descriptions. I'm looking forward to your revision! Thanks:)

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