The life of Hermy the Hermit Crab
March Post
Kyler Gibb
Little Hermy the Hermit Crab woke up to the suns rays shining in on his homemade, Italian silk, sea-star patterned covers. Today was the big day! It was his first day of 9th grade. He was the most popular kid in the whole school. He got out of bed, stretched, and went out to the kitchen to make some delicious hash browns and apple juice. When he was done eating he got dressed and was on his way.
He got to school and immediately went to find his home room and sat down on the back row of classroom 184. His teacher, Mr. Bass, walked in and told everyone to get out there science text books and to begin reading page five. "Oh no", said Hermy with an frightened look on his face, "That is the one thing I forgot to bring with me, what is he going to do?" Mr. Bass looked up, noticed his face and asked, "Is everything okay over there Mr. Hemit?" Hermy didn't know what to do so he said, "Well, yeah but the thing is--" and he was cut off by his teacher. "I know what it is, you forgot you book didn't you?" Hermy responded with a relieved kind of tone and responded, "Yes that is what I am making a big deal about!" "Okay then, come park you behind right here next to my desk and you can share my book with me!"
Hermy looked at his teacher and dropped his jaw as low as the floor and all of his classmates started laughing and pointing at him. The whole rest of the day he had to share Mr. Bass' book, sit next to him and be embarrassed by the whole class.
Ring, Ring, Ring. Hermy packed up all of his belongings and charged out to the hallway when he was interrupted by his teacher. "Hermy, I would like to see you after school tomorrow because I have a conference today." Hermy nodded yes and walked away to the door. He got to the door and started sprinting to the main entry. He booked out of the doors and ran straight to his house where he then set down his things on a desk and plopped on his bed and took a four hour nap, woke up, ate dinner, and then went to bed for another seven hours.
Good Job Kyler this is hilarious! I wouldn't think writing about Hermy The Crab... But great job! I would like to hear a more exciting/interesting ending but other than that great job!
ReplyDeleteOk, I saw that you changed your SUPAF piece--thanks! This one is much better--add more detail and description and tie up the ending better, but it's a fun piece and you did a great job:) Thank you for going back on and revising!
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