Tuesday, October 28, 2014

Poetry Contest

Poetry Contest:


Pledge Allegiance Means To Me:
America;
The Country of success, power, and freedom,
The bravest to be,
The strongest of them all,
The most powerful of them all,
Allegiance;
The duty of fidelity having faithfulness,
To be owned by subject or citizen,
loyalty or commitment of a subordinate position,
To a superior or an individual to a group or cause.
Pledge;
a promise or undertaking,
to do as if you say;
to prove you do as if you say;
(What the Pledge of Allegiance Means To Me)
-Shayli Habibian

4 comments:

  1. Ok, that makes more sense:) For the contest, it's got to be an essay, not a poem. Beautiful wording though--just expand it to an essay. Thanks:)

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  2. Great Job Shayli! I really liked your poem. I liked how you described what each one meant. And i agree with Mrs. Robins. I think it is supposed to be an essay! keep up the great work!

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