Journey To The Center Of Earth
Once upon a time there was a boy named Matt Van Gils. He was a young Lavaridge student and had brown hair, brown eyes and was very athletic. One day he was on his way to test his brand new soccer ball on the soccer field and he looked away for a split second and when he looked back it was gone! He had to do something but he didn't know where to look. He looked everywhere for hours and hours because he loved it so very much. After 5 ½ hours of looking he finally noticed that there was a note on the ground that said,”
“I am taking your ball to my lair which is in the center of the earth. If you want it back you have to come down and kill me!!!!”
-T Rex
“Oh my gosh how could I be so stupid, it was right where she disappeared and I never even saw it when i looked for hours”! Luckily he already had a ticket to a trip there and back so he left immediately.On his flight there he saw so many weird and strange animals that he had never ever seen in his whole entire life and his favorite part of the trip was when he saw his mommy! Finally he arrived and he found T Rex’s secret hideout and killed the dinosaur. “It was the toughest most bloodiest battle I have ever been in, even though i broke my back and dislocated my eyeballs it was worth it to save my brand new soccer ball”, said Matt in front of the camera crew who were on live and Matt returned to America and him and his Brazuca lived happily ever after!!!!!!
THE END
Better than the first time. Try adding a lot more detail and description. Not sure about the "mommy" stuff--seems like you could really take this to the next level.
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