Good job Matt! I liked your poem but i also agree with luke. The beginning started off great but maybe you could rhyme a little more and it would be great! Keep up the great work!
Great poem, but I like how you listed all the things that you do in fall, I think a lot of people could relate to that. I think you need to add a little more rhyming near the middle part. Keep up the great work!
Good start--you need to add a lot to this. Think of appealing to your readers senses, make them see, hear, smell and feel:) Adjectives can be your friend--use them!
Nice Job Matt. I think that you are good at writing poems. I really liked how much you rhymed. My favorite lines were when you said "ring the bells, smell the smells". The only thing I think you should change is just add a lot more to it. It is really short, but it is still a pretty good poem.
Great matt. I liked it a lot. I would add some rhyming to it though but still great.
ReplyDeleteGood job Matt! I liked your poem but i also agree with luke. The beginning started off great but maybe you could rhyme a little more and it would be great! Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteGreat poem, but I like how you listed all the things that you do in fall, I think a lot of people could relate to that. I think you need to add a little more rhyming near the middle part. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteGood start--you need to add a lot to this. Think of appealing to your readers senses, make them see, hear, smell and feel:) Adjectives can be your friend--use them!
ReplyDeleteNice Job Matt. I think that you are good at writing poems. I really liked how much you rhymed. My favorite lines were when you said "ring the bells, smell the smells". The only thing I think you should change is just add a lot more to it. It is really short, but it is still a pretty good poem.
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