The Lost Art
Many people say that cursive is hard but, some say it is easy. But what I think is that cursive is hard but it is needed in our world today. If we did not have cursive then how would we write our signature, how would we tell one person's handwriting from somebody else. People think that cursive is not needed. People don't know how much we need cursive. If we did not have cursive then we would not be able to buy anything because you have to sign the receipt when you buy things with your credit card. People do not know how important cursive is to our society.
This is a good start! If you make it a bit longer with more paragraphs, then it will be really good. Looks good!
ReplyDeleteI think you did a great job! I liked how you added very nice detail and referred it as "Lost Art". I think you could have made it a little bit longer, and more detail of what cursive actually is. Other than that you did amazing! :)
ReplyDeleteGood job! You described the situation very well. One thing you should look into is kind of like what Mrs. Robins told us to do a few weeks ago. She said try not to add in your own opinion and just base it off of facts and evidence. Other than that good job!
ReplyDeleteI really liked it, but I think you could make it a little bit more lengthy and detailed. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job! I love how you added good detail. I do think that you should make it longer though, and add some facts. You should make it longer and break it up into a few paragraphs, it would be even more amazing. Great job!
ReplyDeleteGood start but you've got a lot of work to do on this:). Make it into a short argumentative essay with a claim statement defended by facts. You use the work
ReplyDelete"people" a lot which makes your argument weak. Use facts and take your opinion out. I know you've got it in you to be a great writer--go for it!