Letter Contest Revision
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writing and cursive writing being lost arts, I have mixed feelings for.
First of all, cursive writing has no value in today's society. Why?
Because in society, people like using technology because it’s faster and
more convenient. Sure we need cursive to sign papers, but really,
that’s the only thing we have to use it for. Also, people could learn
just their name in cursive and nothing more. In addition, people never
wanted to use symbols for communication like the Aztecs, because we
created a better, easier way for communication. That’s kind of the same
thing as cursive and our society. Although, I do think that we should
preserve cursive because it is part of our history.
Letter
writing, I think does have a value in today's society. Like the article
said, "Letters provide a bridge to the people from our past. They are
much more meaningful and they are also part of our history. If we never
had letters, we would just get texts from people, and that does not give
you a feel for someone's mood and how they write". But, a letter does.
It is important that they are preserved, because they remind us of our
relatives and what life was like back then. Those are my thoughts on
letter and cursive writing being lost arts.
Great start! I'd work on revisions beginning with organization. In the first paragraph, have a claim statement then use your body paragraphs to back-up your claim. You've got great evidence, just put it in order and you'll have a winning essay!
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