Thinking
So lately I have been thinking about many things, mostly about college and grades. I didn't realize how important it is to have a plan and know what college you want to go to. I mostly want to be a vet so I have to find a college that teaches that kind of stuff. After I find that college, I have to find how many years it will be and how much it will cost. For the job I want to do, It is going to cost a lot of money and I will have to take many years of class. I was thinking about saving money now because I don't want to be able to go for a couple years, then not be able to pay the rest. Maybe I will be able to get a scholar ship. Hopefully I do so that it will be easier for my family and I. Have you thought about this kind of stuff?
I think about this all the time! Very true. I like your writing.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Alaina! You expressed your feelings well. One thing to consider is correcting the few spelling errors and add in a couple adjectives as well. Other than that good job.
ReplyDeleteGreat job! I usually do think about what I want to do when I grow up, but I have not thought about the time or money. I also agree with Sophie about the Adjectives.
ReplyDeleteThis is called stream-of-consciousness writing, or writing about what is on your mind. I remember thinking about all of this when I was a teenager. More adjectives would be good, but really strong writing about what is running through your head. Hang in there, the best is yet to come:)
ReplyDeleteGreat job! It's cool that you want to be a vet, animals are awesome. I would like it to be longer for more of your great writing.
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