The Lost Art
Many people say that cursive is hard but, some say it is easy. But what I think is that cursive is hard but it is needed in our world today. If we did not have cursive then how would we write our signature our, how would we tell one person's handwriting from somebody elses. People think that cursive is not needed. People don't know how much we need cursive. If we did not have cursive then we would not be able to buy anything because you have to sign the receipt when you buy things with your credit card. People do not know how important cursive is to our society.
This is a really good paragraph! You could add some more detail to it and make it longer. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThis is a pretty good paragraph. But I think you should work on not putting a sentence more than once. Although, I did like the very important ideas that cannot be ignored. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteGood argument! I was just wondering is "our" supposed to be after signature? Probably typo. And also you could put more detail and restating what you are saying in a different way. Great Job though!
ReplyDeleteGood job. I liked your reasons. I agree with Aspen, what is the "our" after signature supposed to be? Other than that, it was great.
ReplyDeleteNice job, I agree with you saying that cursive needs to stay. I like all of your reasons but I think that in the last two sentences you need to add a comma or something to break it up a little. But other than that, I think it was really great.
ReplyDeleteYou did a great job! I love that you argued that cursive should stay. Now that I've read this, I agree that it should stay. I think that you could have made it a little longer and added more details and you had some errors that you could fix though. But other than those, great job! Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteGood work but remember to add evidence to defend your side:)
ReplyDeleteI liked your writing. I agree with you that cursive should stay. I think if you add a little more detail on how we need cursive, your writing will be even better. Good job.
ReplyDeleteI totally agree we do need cursive in our world today, but do make more details and make it longer.
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