Do you Believe?
Dear Scotland,
Do you think that the beast of Loch Ness is real, or even worth searching for? I think that there could be a possibility that there could a unknown creature living in the Loch Ness. I have three reasons why I think that you should keep searching, first, Many times people have said that they have supposedly seen it, Second, This could be a huge discovery to find an unknown water creature, Third, It’s possible that some dinosaurs could have possibly survived.
First, Many times people have said that they have supposedly seen it. There has been numerous witnesses that say that they have encountered the creature, and others say that they have seen it. Plus people have gotten a little bit of evidence, like pictures. Though most of the pictures are blurry and look unreal it could be possible.
Second, This could be a huge discovery to find an unknown water creature. It would be completely mind blowing if scientist kept looking and found the creature, it would be a huge discovery. It would change the way we thought about history, and change Legends into facts, and you would look at the dinosaurs differently and think that others could have survived.
Third, It’s possible that some dinosaurs could have possibly survived. Some dinosaurs could have survived, because when there is a disaster or extinction someone or something is likely to survive. Also sharks are dinosaurs and they survived, so why couldn’t another water dinosaur survive too?
I think that you should keep searching for The Loch Ness Monster, because once again, Many times people have said that they have see it, and It could be a huge discovery, and It’s possible that some dinosaurs could have survived. Though its a lot easier to keep trying to prove that something is real rather than to try and prove that it’s not real. So I hope that you will keep searching for The Loch Ness Monster and hopefully find it one day.
From: Ryan Bethers
Good writing. In the first paragraph, a lot of the words that you capitalized should just be lower case. But good job!
ReplyDeleteGood job. I like all of you reasons that they should keep the search on. In a couple of the paragraphs there are a couple places that you need to capitalize and lower case. Other than that good job.
ReplyDeleteIt was a pretty good letter. There were some pretty good things about it. I liked how you used all the facts you could get your hands on and you brought them out onto the paper. But if you strengthened those couple facts, I believe that this letter would be a bit better. But all together it was a good letter.
ReplyDeleteThis is really persuasive. You could have used more details in the first paragraph where the claim should be. Good job!
ReplyDeleteIt was good writing and convincing. But for each reason, you could have supported each claim a little more. Good job, though.
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