Chuck Norris woke up in a deep crater. Must have been snoring again he thought as he got out of bed. Then the phone rang. When he picked it up, he heard Superman’s voice. “It’s Batman. He’s gone.” Chuck was not expecting that. “We need to assemble the team,” he replied. “It’s time.”
Minutes later, Chuck and Superman met on the corner of “Epic” and “Story”. Chuck Norris brought the magic conch shell of amazing power. “Blow the conch!” said Superman, clearly in a hurry. Chuck blew. Then, as if by magic, four figures appeared. The first of which was the Incredible Hulk. Next came Dobby, Smeagol, and the Doctor with his Tardis. “We came as fast as we could,” said Dobby in his annoyingly high pitched voice. “We need to save Batman,” said Chuck. “He’s been taken to the center of the earth by cavemen! Hulk, I need you to smash the earth’s crust so we can get to the mantle. “Grrr…” Hulk replied as he pulled a street lamp out of the ground. He started smashing.
After about thirty minutes of smashing, Hulk finally got through 25 miles of crust, down to the mantle. “Now Dobby,” said Superman. “I need you to create a force field around all of us and float us down through the two liquid layers. It didn’t take much time before they were standing right in the center of the planet. Who did they find there? Dinosaurs.
“Smeagol! I need you to use the ring to hide us from the giant man eating dinosaur!” Screamed Chuck Norris. Smeagol put on the ring and hid them all. Once Chuck saw that his friends were safe, he decided to beat up that big old reptile. He punched it in the jaw. The sound of its skull shattering echoed off the walls. “All clear guys!” he yelled. Smeagol took off the ring and revealed the team in their hiding place. “Now we should all split up and look for Batman,” said the Doctor. They all split into teams to look for the lost super hero. But as soon as they decided who was going with who, Dobby was suddenly on fire. “I’m on fire guys!” he screamed. “It must have been the heat of the iron core!” yelled the Doctor. “Just leave him, he’s done for.” So they left Dobby to die a fiery death.
After much searching, the Legendary Team of Awesomeness found Batman tied up and surrounded by a bunch of cavemen. “The time is now to save our friend,” said Superman. “Go!” Then one by one, the team picked off the cavemen. Hulk smashed while the Doctor used his Sonic Screwdriver to blow up a caveman's brain. Smeagol just sat and admired the One Ring, until his face was stabbed by a caveman with a spear. The battle was over. Batman was free. But the journey just begun. “How are we going to get back?” asked Batman. “Leave that to me,” said the Doctor as he stepped into the Tardis. “Hurry! Get in before the Tardis lights on fire--like Dobby!” They all got into the Tardis and teleported back to the crust. After much work, Chuck Norris filled the hole to the center of the earth forever.
Or so they thought…
They will encounter more problems in a sequel.
It was a good story and I liked the way used characters from diffrent movies. Just so you know for future refrence Dobby speaks in 3rd person.
ReplyDeleteHaha I loved how it started out with Chuck Norris that was really funny. It was a really good story.
ReplyDeleteHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE IT!!! Even though Dobby dies, it was funny and creative. Like Ethan said, dobby does speak in third person. besides that GR8 JOB!!!
ReplyDeleteI thought your story was great but i think you couldve used a bit more detail of what it was like in the center of the earth. Other than that I thought it was very funny and a great story :)
ReplyDeleteGood job! I agree with Baylee. If you used more detail on what you smelt and more detail of what it was like being there.But besides that it was really funny and i loved it!
ReplyDeleteLol! Pretty good sampling of different pop-culture characters. You write with a lot of speed and energy--fun to read. Make sure you put appropriate spacing with dialogue. I'd slow down the story a bit, a lot happens really quickly and it can be hard to follow. Add more sensory detail too. Keep up the good work!
ReplyDeleteAgreeing with Mrs. Robins, LOL. This made me laugh right at the beginning, especially when each of the characters showed up. Also, the references made it really creative and interesting. However, the story (again agreeing with Mrs. Robins) moves very quickly and too much happens in too short a time. So add some details in between to make it longer and even more interesting.
ReplyDeleteP.S. Why did Dobby have to die again?!?! Hasn't he already had enough pain and suffering?!?! :)
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