Tuesday, January 27, 2015

Should Celebrities Advertise Junk Food To Kids?
Do you think that celebrities should advertise junk food to kids? Would it be a problem? I think that it is their decision! The first reason why i think that it is their choice is because it is not their responsibility to watch what kids around the world eat? That is their parents job! They can eat and drink whatever they want to!  The second reason i think that is it is up the child of what they eat! My third reason is it is not very fair to let kids eat whatever they want and not let the celebrities! I  think that it is the celebrities choice if they want to be on an advertisement or not!
The first reason why  i think that it is their choice is because it is not their responsibility to watch what the kids around the globe are eating! It is the kids choice to pick what they eat! The children look at what their parents eat and thats what they eat! They were taught that in their younger years! That is why i think that it is the nonsense!
The second reason why i think that it is the celebrities choice on whether to be on a commercial or not is because it is up to the kids on what they eat! It is just a person! They shouldn’t think just because that person is doing that i might as well too! They should never think that! It is not the celebrities fault that there are obese kids on the planet! There is only obese kids because of what they put into their bodies! It is up to them!
My last reason is that it is not very fair that kids get to eat whatever they want and celebrities would have to stick to a diet or something and not be able to eat any treats! It is not very fair to let kids eat junk and not let celebrities just because they are famous?? i think that they should be able to eat whatever they want. People are on junk food advertisements all the time? Why not celebrities? It will help the company get more customers! Well of course it might affect peoples weight and all but they shouldn’t put the blame on the celebrities? Why make it so other people can eat it but not famous people??
There are some reason that make me want to say “no, celebrities can’t be on advertisements!” It just makes people want to eat bad food more and gain more weight! I bet thats the problem! It might sound crazy but some people are obsessed with famous artists and celebrities, and want to do whatever they do! They might just start eating what the famous character does! It might start something terrible! I mean how terrible would it be if everyone on the planet just ate junk food? What would that start? What would the future be like? It would be terrible. That is why part of says to not let celebrities be on advertisements.
As you can see, there are some reasons that  i think that famous people should not and should be on advertisements! It is kind of a hard decision. For the most part…I think that it is there choice on their life and their decisions! It is up to them on what they choose. If kids get fat and overweight, it is not the celebrities fault! It is the child's decision if they want to eat all that junk! Part of it is the parents choice also! As you can see i think that it is the famous person’s choice to choose what they do and what they eat.

7 comments:

  1. I thought it was really good! there was a few errors on punctuation, though. One sentence had a question mark at the end when it was a statement. But other than that, It was really convince able and I liked it!

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  2. Wow that was really good Annie. I love your writing! If you fix a few punctuation errors this piece would be even better! Good job!

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  4. It is a good essay but it has just a little errors and if you change those errors it will be an even better essay. :)

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  5. It is a good essay but it has just a little errors and if you change those errors it will be an even better essay. :)

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  7. Nice job Annie, you are a really good writer. I really liked the vocabulary you used in the essay. I liked when you said that "it is up to the child to choose what they want to eat". The only thing that I think you should change is to not put so many exclamation marks at the end of almost every sentence otherwise it is awesome.

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