Are Science and Religion Enemy's?
Yes, I think science and religion are enemy's. Why? Because science and religion often have different explanations for the same thing. Two examples of this are how the Earth was created and human evolution. In those situations, science and religion have two completely different ideas. Although, I do think that enemy's is to strong of a word. They are in conflict with each other. That is why I think science and religion are, not enemy's, but in conflict with each other.
That was really good! The only thing i would suggest is to describe the examples a little more. Everything else was really good.
ReplyDeleteExcellent! However, I would recommend using more evidence.
ReplyDeleteYes. Use more evidence in your story and maybe next time try to start out with a better hook. It was still really good tho.
ReplyDeleteThat was good. There were some grammar and spelling errors. It was also short. Good job.
ReplyDeleteThat was great! I think that if you added some more detail it could make it even better! Also there are a few grammar and spelling mistakes! Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteGood job! I liked what Annie said, if you add more grammar. Also in the last sentence, take out the first comma. But other than that great job!
ReplyDeleteIt was good but the commas in the last sentence threw me off. But other than that it was good.
ReplyDeleteI liked it. All I think you could have done is describe the reasons a little more. I think that you should delete some of those commas in the last sentence, other than that, it was great.
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