Different Way
black, white, green or blue
show off your natural hues.
don't be scared,
you should be prepared.
being different is okay,
even if it's not society's perfect way.
you don't need to change,
it's boring being the same.
I like you for you,
if you're multicolored that's cool too.
Nice job Baylee!
ReplyDeleteI really liked your poem. Your a great poet! It was really 'smooth' when I read it. It flows really well. The only suggestion I have is to maybe make another stanza. Other than that, great job! Keep up the great work!! :)
That was really awesome. It made me feel happy when I read it. Very inspirational. I liked how well the words rhymed. I also think it would be good to add another stanza. Really though, that was amazing! I absolutely loved it!
ReplyDeleteThat was awesome! The rhyming and the message were awesome. I think it ended a little abruptly. Another stanza would have made it feel complete. I thought that it was really good though.
ReplyDeleteThat was really good! The only thing you could do is probably add another stanza, as said by others.. Other than that it was amazing!
ReplyDeleteThis was ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!!! I love how you were saying that you like someone the way they are, it made me so happy! You should add another stanza, like everyone else is saying, because then it would feel more complete. I liked how you made the words rhyme so smoothly. Keep up the amazing work!
ReplyDeleteThat was really really good! When I read it I felt happy and inspired! The only thing that i would suggest is to add another stanza. Keep up the great work!
ReplyDeleteRight On! I really enjoying reading this poem. I agree with mostly everyone, you should just add one more stanza and maybe fix the punctuation stuff. Other than that, I loved it.
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