Human Robots
Scientists are building special robots that can help humans with their everyday jobs, and they don’t mind doing the dirty work. They have to be programmed a special way to be able to do this. Sometimes it is difficult for robots to do this but scientists are still working on it. We have come a long way but we are not done yet.
Before the robots can work like humans, they have to be programmed. They can be programmed in different ways for different jobs. Some robots are robot athletes and compete with other robots. Scientists are working on a robot that can be a life saver in emergencies. It will be difficult because they have to teach them many different moves. But building sport robots is great practice.
Building the human robots is quite a challenge for scientist. It must be practically perfect before it can put peoples life in its hands. We have made so many discoveries about the human robots and are discovering more each day. We have come a long way but can still go further. Maybe someday you will have a human robot in your house!
Nice job Hallie!
ReplyDeleteI like your essay. The only suggestion I have is to maybe describe what robots can help humans with. The 2nd and 3rd sentences both say 'this' and it doesn't clearly describe what 'this', or helping humans with, is. Other than that, great job. Keep up the great work!! :)
Good job hallie! You could put in a body paragraph to explain it more, or is the word "Before the paragraph? If so make it more visible. And maybe put in another sentence after "is great practice" to sum it up. Other than that super good job!:)
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